The feedback we received externally we felt could of gone into more detail for example sound effects too loud - this doesn't tell us which clip or what. They outlines clear points of which we have clear solutions for which is the same as our internal peer feedback which shows similar points and clearly outlines how we need to improve. The following shows the pros and cons:
Pros
- Good storyline
- Camerawork - upstairs and in mirror - good angles
- Field - good jumpiness
- Good continuous filming
Cons
- Sound effects too loud
- Hear people talking and laughing
- Scenes are quite long - need to be shorter
- Meant to be thriller - boys laughing
To conclude, as well as the various negatives of which have been highlighted to us there are also the similar positive feedback points such as; The good storyline, Good continuity and clearly including codes and conventions of the Psychological thriller genre. furthermore, as its is only a rough cut we had the aim to 'cut out the laughter & talking', cut the scenes etc. So we are overall happy with our feedback, as we our confident we can iron out the few negatives of which our peers felt were present.
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